Eithne, the girl of his dreams

    She is briefly mentioned at the end of my first segment of rough work for Script Frenzy, and while I am working on more of the script, I wanted to focus on Eithne for a moment, simply because she’s probably my favourite female character I’ve ever conceived (not to toot my own horn, but I think for once I really got into the mind of a woman, rather than doing the classic job of writing a male character in a female body).

    Her name is rather apt, and I do love apt names.  Eithne is Irish Gaelic (or Manx) for “little fire” and I think I’ve reflected that in this character quite well.  I first encountered the name as I did some Irish History research into Fiacha Finnolach, and just fell in love with the name Eithne.  The name fits perfectly with my tried and true method of nouns, using root languages to create the strangeness needed without extreme troubles for the reader (if you guessed a pronunciation like Athnee, you’re pretty much right, although modern variations include Enya).  What I also found perfect (and in many cases is the secondary root for name choices) is the meaning.  I am flawed in that I have routines, ruts, and predictable streaks, so my friends reading this have already assumed Eithne is a redheaded firebrand, and they are mostly right.  Little Fire for a petite redhead, what could be better?  But nevertheless, let me go on to describe her as a character without giving away too much story or secrets.

    Eithne’s origins will be in question for quite some time in the story.  While she possesses many physical characteristics of the northern territories of Coventry Boondis (much like our heroes Altan and Bauzak), she is decidedly not a resident of such a place.
    She wears her hair moderately long – half way down her back – and usually in a ponytail that she splits and lets spill over each shoulder.  While she claims she does not dye her hair, it’s hard to believe it is natural.  The colour starts as a nearly black auburn at the roots and shimmers and coalesces into a brilliant orange at the tips, covering all manner of dark and bright reds in between. 
    She is petite – no taller than 5’3” – with the musculature and definition of a runner or dancer; essentially, she is lithe and pliant.  She has a thin waist with the minor tummy fat of a lean woman, broad hips (which are somewhat asymmetrical and entirely out of character considering the rest of her body).  She does not possess a heaving bosom, rather a chest that is large enough to indicate femininity but certainly not over sized for a woman of her stature. 
    She has a round, innocent face suggesting youth (why she is thought to be a young adult by all standards), with large doe eyes of steely blue, pleasant lips, small ears that protrude from her hair noticeably but not exaggeratedly, and a nose that is neither buttoned nor bulbous, but crooks slightly to the left.  The latter has lead many to believe she grew up on the streets of Coventry upon Bry, and has at some point broken her nose.
   
    To describe her personality succinctly, she is one part brat, one part diva, and one part hardened conscript soldier (although the last is rarely seen, but invaluable nonetheless). 
    Eithne is extremely loyal – not to mention possessive and protective – of Altan.  She knows his goal in life requires him to leave every now and then, and she accepts it with love, but clings to him playfully when he is around.  She’s one of the few people he tolerates nicknames from, and his disposition obviously changes when she fawns over him. 
    This is not to say Eithne is submissive.  While she is childlike in her adoration and love for Altan, she can also be rather self-righteous.  Her entire personality will change at the drop of a hat if needed, and she will lash out.  She feels the entire room should look at her when she enters, and she spends Altan’s money to ensure it (Altan won’t admit it, but he adores Eithne’s “fashion shows”). 
    No one is quite sure what Eithne’s agenda is; she supports Altan in everything, she is his consummate and eternal companion, but some suspect she has ulterior motives.

    A note to readers: Altan Barr, our hero, is thirty five by the time our story is in full swing, and Eithne, his lover, girlfriend, soul mate, what have you, is by all reckoning only twenty.  In our real world, contemporary society, this may seem less shocking than in the fictional world.  Spring-Winter romances (let us be fair, this is more spring-late summer) are not unheard of nowadays.  In Taleasia (or Barsome, still need your opinions) it is not entirely uncommon for someone Barr’s age to have a daughter like Eithne, especially as she can pass for eighteen and he for nearly forty.  In many of the towns and cities they have travelled to, they do get strange looks, and the Diva side of Eithne’s personality relishes in them.  Some may read this and think me perverse, writing about a man in love with a girl half his age; your opinions are valid and your own, but I find this pair is far more socially interesting, and therefore more interesting to write, than something more generic as we see in modern fiction.

PS: I like to add pictures from Deviant art to help you imagine what I am saying; sadly I’ve never seen an artist’s rendition that gets anywhere near this character.

Scripts, Scripts, Everywhere! RUN!

Yes, I am aware I am late on my post, it should have occurred Friday and I suck for letting it take this long to rectify my mistake.  I spent the weekend bashing out some Script Frenzy stuff, and after several attempts seem to have found my stride.  I must say, making a Script is very hard for someone used to prose, the very body of content you must drop is huge, and if a real director ever reads it, he'd hate you to tell him how to direct.  So I'm trying to be lean and mean.

What I have for you today then, is the first several pages of the Script.  I've had to outsource its storage as I couldn't get Blogger to keep the formatting required for a script.  Still, enjoy the first few pages of the script (title unknown, but so what?) here.
What I want to ask you all now is this: Taleasia or Barsome?  If you were naming a world and had to pick one, which would it be?  One's probably the first name for a world I ever conceived, the other is an obvious hack job, but I like them both and am torn.  Help me readers, you're my only hope.

Absence Makes the Heart Grow Fonder?

    I actually don’t agree with that statement, I think presence of mind and a desire for something makes the heart grow fonder.  Alas, it seemed to be the best title I could come up with after an absolutely dismal absence from blogging for a couple of weeks.
    I won’t provide excuses or apologies, suffice it to say, Life happened and I responded.  But that isn’t to say I wasn’t thinking about this blog – and the story it supports – whenever I had the time.  Because I did.
    I’ve been thinking about the story, and more so about the characters, since I signed up for Script Frenzy (which began yesterday and I’m already a page behind).  What is becoming so sadly apparent is that you can’t have the same number of characters – or depth of characters – in a script as you can in a novel.
    I’ve had a core concept of characters for some time now, some have names, some don’t, and I’m realising that as much as I love all of them, they won’t ever be all core characters.  I’ve realised I can only really focus on the protagonist, the antagonist, and a perhaps three other lesser heroes, and so that’s what I intend on doing.

    The protagonist, our hero (tinkering with the name Altan Barr), is half cavalier, half pained.  He was a brute at war, and suffers mentally for it, but continues to fight because he knows it’s right.  He’s about 35 now, and I am still playing with the romantic connection (this is where comments are encouraged).  I am vacillating between a mysterious agent whose goals are never clear and is very much the hero’s equal in all regards, OR a younger woman (approximately 20) who dotes and adores our hero, but is no damsel in distress.  Truthfully, this second option has far reaching potential, as her true nature will suddenly become parallel with the “mysterious agent.”  That said, I am still hard pressed to pick between two feminine archetypes I actually adore (again, this is where comments are encouraged, hint hint nudge nudge).

    Then there is the villain, who I really have no doubts about (I find creating a definitively evil character so much easier).  He has veiled himself as a member of an obscure (read: non existent) religious sect dedicated towards peace at any means.  He has rallied one of the great nations to war and expansion (in doing so, has actually created the darkness in Barr’s heart) and now rules over the majority of the known world.  This villain’s (name yet to be determined, playing with something like Krasius Xan) true purpose is to find a set of items valued to his real organisation, which (if you’ve read the histories I’ve posted previously HERE) is actually interstellar rather than local.  Suffice it to say, he’s quite clever and very sadistic, although the latter is far too extreme and can result in him being short sighted.

    Then of course, the supplementary cast.  The best friend, loveable brute, and perhaps the character closest to my heart (but he’s not fit for hero) is Barr’s best friend, a man who never fought in a war until Barr lost his arm.  This friend, (tentative name, Bauzak) is big and ogrish looking (that is to say, unconventional) but he’s probably the smartest man around and has a big heart to boot, even if he does see things a little too black and white.  He’s dedicated his life to protecting the woman he loves, Cary, but sadly she thinks of him more familial than he’d like. 
    Cary (short for Caryatid) rounds out the group as a master marksman and dancer, the “face” of this resistance cell, because she is beautiful and deadly, if a little unconventional in her beauty.

    That’s the core of characters I’ve devised, with others in mind, both major and minor, and heroic and villainous.  What was (for the novelisation) a fairly large string of characters (which to be fair, won’t disappear) seems to be slimming down considerably for good cause.  I think it’ll help out here now. 

    Looking forward to comments.